In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
For people in few countries, to buy a home at once is more important than to pay rent for it frequently.
It seems to be very difficult to buy a home since it might cost a lot of money in the first place but liberation and flexibility are also the important concern of human nature which might be refrained in case
of renting it.
Firstly, In my opinion, it may be considered both a positive as well as negative situation since both have merits and
demerits of their own.
People owning a house has lots of benefits because they could do anything within the house premises, more specifically the
people who have small kids with themself will be more secure and may don't have to worry about landlord. They also could
remodle the house or repaint according to their will and ease.
Secondly, To talk about the merit side of the rented house, I consider it as the best approach in an immediate change of plan
and action since it is unknown when anybody have to move from a place to next because of the unexpected encounter of change. This would not
keep someone dubious about the concern of the place they have benn living yet and ultimately giving the automation of movement.
Therefore, I want to conclude that both the choices as to buy and rent the house have their advantages and consequences
at the same place. It depends on the situation of any individual and perhaps there may be one other important concerning factor so-called as"Economic condition".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77606177606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69227442086 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4605854929 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.444444444 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240730603152 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895044262922 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704867848175 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729432083879 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621071937911 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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