In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having a roof over the head is one of the basic necessities, whether it is rented or owned. As a matter of fact, in many nations people believe it is essential to own a home instead of living in rented ones. I personally agree with the idea and will put forth the reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, having own home has several advantages. People do not have to worry about rent and the rules and regulations associated with the place, which reduces stress to certain extent. Some senior citizens believe, it is a means of securing the future of the upcoming generations and the latter can focus on their growth, in careers and education, without having to worry about shelter. For instance, in countries like Bangladesh people prefer to build building which not only provides a home but also ensures a source of income from the rents of other apartments.
However, there are few disadvantages of owning a home. While in rented apartments the security of the apartment is the responsibility of the landlord, this becomes the responsibility of home owners. This requires owners to invest a considerable amount in securing their residences including the hiring of a security guard. In addition, the landlords have to should the responsibility for maintenance work like keeping the water tanks clean whereas in owned homes it is the duty of the owners and becomes troublesome when an emergency arises, such as water pipe leakage, causing disruption in a planned days’ work.
To sum up, although having a personal resident has some cons, the benefits of having mental peace and security outweighs them greatly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ving a roof over the head is one of the basic necessities, whether it is rented or owned. As a ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9706959707 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77913128344 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.720526956 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190556428953 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694713911602 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385128645503 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991950250063 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044116465252 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.