In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Due to the cultural tradition, many people prefer to have ownerships of houses to make a clear plan for their finance and lives. However, modern society brings a major diversity of accommodations for ensuring human flexibility in their cash flows and living places which means fixed houses might be sometimes an obstacle.
There are two vital reasons for accomodation’s ownerships which must be no wories about the place to stay in the future and clear amount of money needed to pay for banks. Firstly, buying a home even owing money, people seem to be more comfortable because they know that they have a place to go back and in safe which inspire them to work hard to pay for all debts and improve living standards. Furthermore, a financial obligation is show them exactly how much and how long to finish which is more effortless to arrange their life and also a motivation for hardious working days. Thus, it cannot be denied that a owned house could result in a secure life but a more immediate addatabilities probably suit to a rapid changing life today.
On the other hand, some of people argue that am owned accommodation could slow down alterations which are essential in industrial revolution. Initially, it is little demmanding to exchange a house for money as soon as you have a potential investment, insteadly, renting an apartment with banking savings seems dominantly advantageous. Moreover, an incorrect home buying or moving new regions should meet a difficulty if no buye or no pricing compromise. Hence,
In conclusion, even though owning a house or apartment could offer some benefits like safe in finance and stability, it is evidental that this occupation should provide a low liquidity and inflexibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01736111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90172886086 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3970058538 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155247894218 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581294845452 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220472125335 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901401615923 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00739236453409 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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