In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Private property has always been considered as a compound part of a success measure of any individual. Therefore, most citizens prefer purchasing their own apartments or houses in some societies rather than living in a temporary accomodation. I think that finantial efficiency is the primary reason behind this phenomenon, which is a boon for people.
Every human being that is imposed by traditional standards of living require a roof to sleep, to eat and to upbring their children, who require protection from weather and noise. Since owning a home is expensive for some individuals, they are forced to rent a flat, which usually costs around half of an average salary. However, modern banks offer a wide range of different mortgage conditions, allowing people to become owners of a property after some time. This usually means that tenant will have full rights on the house with similar monthly payments. For example, according to the Times review on 17th of December 2010, an average apartment in New York costs 10 year rent fees, which makes buying more convenient than renting for people, who plan to live in the city for a decade. In other words, temporary homes are usually more expensive for regular people than permanent ones.
Because most citizens possess their flats after a short period, they are much more secure in a face of economy falls. It gives people extra savings, due to absence of invoices on their accomodation. Therefore, an individual is prepared to occasions of losing their job both finantially and morally, which reduces stress and improves health of a person. For instance, the recent study on mental conditions of Harvard University claimed, that average American has poorer mental state than German due to high bills on their house. Thus, private property has a positive influence on its owner.
In conclusion, I truly believe optimizing their living expenses by buying houses is beneficial for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'occasion'.
Suggestion: occasion
...Therefore, an individual is prepared to occasions of losing their job both finantially an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1356466877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63916656753 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624605678233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8296014272 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189210617517 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583474497837 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046843541163 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101967616067 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662102134173 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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