The graph shows the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment Summarize the main features of the graph

Essay topics:

The graph shows the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
Summarize the main features of the graph.

The given table illustrates the percentage of average family expenses in four categories in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey and Spain.

The main pattern observed in figures is the predominance of housing in France, the UK, and Germany followed by food and drinks. However, in Turkey and Spain they are switched.

The major source of spendings in France, Germany, and the UK was accommodation with approximately one third in all these countries. The second largest group was food and drinks accounting for about a quarter of total incomes of a household. The clothing made up 7, 15, and 11 per cent respectively, while share of entertainment was only eleven per cent in the UK, followed up France with 13 per cent and Germany with almost one fifth.

Meanwhile, the biggest fraction of salary in Turkey and Spain was spent on foods with 36 and 31 per cent respectively. The housing demanded about one fifth of mean wage in the mentioned countries. Clothing and entertainment had a portion of around 22.5 per cent collectively.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uarter of total incomes of a household. The clothing made up 7, 15, and 11 per cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01149425287 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8921468057 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7279441182 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114564240128 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507688172908 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045136809643 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645679207795 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376178378802 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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