The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European
countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and
make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

The table gives information about the monthly household income in five different countries on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
Overall, all five countries spend most of their money on food and drinks also on housing, however the lower percentage of money were spent on clothing and entertainment.
The proportion of money spent on food and drinks were 36% and 31% in Turkey and Spain, respectively. There were the highest rates of spending on food and drinks. As for the share of housing, in Spain it was 18%, unlike the UK, which spent 37% on housing, this was the highest figure in the expenditure table.
Turning to five countries` expenditure on clothing and entertainment, the UK spent on both household needs 11% Spain spent 8% of money on clothes and 15% on entertainment. Likewise, the other two countries as France and Germany spent more money on entertainment rather than on clothes, by contrast, Turkey`s expenditure on clothing was 12% it higher than percentage of money spent on entertainment.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the UK spent on both household needs 11% Spain spent 8% of money on clothes and 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17159763314 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12310584729 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.018204034 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206867388113 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124103645117 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104252023722 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170303964209 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110375300336 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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