In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Some people argue that, having a personal home is better than renting one for majority of people. Actually , this is quite true because of several factors that can be reason of this case. And that is why I insist that this circumstance has good impact on people's life.
From my point of view, to live in own house is more comfortable than in other's house . By this I mean , people who live in personal house can do everything they want. To illustrate, they can keep their pets in a house or repair the house according to their wishes. However they may learn feeling themselves responsible for things that they usually use when they live in a rented house. So there are also benefits of this like being drawbacks.
Some people, due to difficulties on rent payment of each month , may try to earn much money in order to buy a new house. That is really good situation. On the other hand , some individuals , who will have to move often from one place to another because of their job need not own a house. Owing to the fact that, if they have a house, they have to pay bills, even though they do not live in there. For instance, building insurance is one type of household bills.
In conclusion, majority want to own a house instead of renting one and they tend to work hard to achieve their goals . This can be a good factor on personal development of individuals.
In my view, even though renting may be useful for some of them , its disadvantages seem to be more than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4516994483 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3610124082 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3125 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268343073002 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950972826889 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659205888798 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172944747263 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925292979212 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.