In some countries, owning a home rather than, renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Almost all people want to have their own home rather than live in a rented house, while it is too necessary for our life style. Nowadays, many people and countries prefer to live owning house rather than to renting.
To begin with, rented house is good way increase the personal budget, while if somebody live rented house that person do not pay some taxes and other payment. Secondly, when you want to move other region or country you can it without diffuculties. Finally, the customer can use these services free of charge, if the customer enters into a contract with the landlord and the contract includes home repairs or other services. This way he will be free from many expenses.
On the other hand, most people dream of having their own home and strive for it. Some people think, it is important especially in currently time. In additionn they know about benefits of the owning house, because there are many various reasons. For example, beautiful landscape, green garden and big houses, comfortable rooms. Most importantly reason is live without the limit and hesitate, if you have your own home. Moreover, when you decide changing of the home interior orexterior, you can it everytime and everywhere. Finally, this own apartment is keeped for your children and descendent and I hope, they appreciate yours work.
In conclusion, many people must trying to be private own apartment since childhood, while the lease house is temporary and this house cannot be as a your personal home. Thus, it is positive way to living special own home and as much as possible we should choosing useful side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42932096398 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2211724456 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332836110651 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108167300098 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052490852891 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197248286683 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420346317465 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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