In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People around the world inhibit different types of accommodations according to their personal preferences and affordability. In some nations, individuals prefer possessing a standard house instead of living in a rental one. I believe this is a positive situation and will discuss points in the forthcoming paragraphs, before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
The reason why men and women like to reside in a home is that homeownership is the dream of almost everyone who wishes for comfort and stability in their lives. People prefer to invest in their own homes rather than spending their entire lives in rented accommodations as it is a symbol of accomplishment and status. Moreover, the market value of house is likely to grow with time. For instance, if someone buys a home with some down payment and then pays he rest of the amount in installments, the person is still in profit as he will eventually become the owner of that property.
Purchasing a house is a positive thing because they get the privacy that they want. Individuals do not have to face any hassles from neighbours and can make whatever changes they wish to make in their house without seeking anybody’s approval. For example, I witnessed this when I moved in my personal house from a rented apartment, as I constructed and decorated my house according to my choice and now my privacy never hampers. Thus, it is evident that buying a house is a better idea than residing in rented accommodation.
In conclusion, the abovementioned points make it clear that individuals get many advantages when they purchase their own homes, which cannot be accomplished in rented apartments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'rests'.
Suggestion: rests
...with some down payment and then pays he rest of the amount in installments, the pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02919708029 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02664565842 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7672120209 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19585069844 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642186296739 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041828335351 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107965612951 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322456843441 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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