In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having an own property is much more important than renting in some nations. While there are several factors that caused this situation, and I believe that this is a positive trend.
There are three main reasons that caused people to refer to have their own house. Firstly, having an own property is a symbol of social status. Especially in some Asian countries, people consider success as having the wealth and material possessions, and the house is the most significant symbol. If people would not have their own house, others would not believe that he/she is a successful person. Secondly, some people think that having their own house is a prerequisite for getting married. It is because having an own house is fundamental to build a family. Finally, without having their own property, people always feel like homelessness as well as lack a sense of belongs, even they can rent a place to stay. The house may terminate the lease agreement and let them move out at any time.
Although having an own property required a lot of money, I think this is a positive trend. This would encourage young people to fight for their future. They will make a lot of effort to achieve this gold, thereby boosting the local economy. People have to pay for the taxes for purchasing a property, and housing developers have to build more houses to cope with the demands. Not only it can increase construction business’s income, but also help to raise a country’s fiscal revenue, therefore governments have more funds to allocate to different essential sectors, including schools, health care and public transport systems.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to push people to buy their own properties in some areas. From a long-term perspective, this trend will bring more benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95973154362 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61443640011 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8261896968 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225560079262 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865032979928 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567222573351 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167743092802 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562434765765 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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