In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In recent years, some people believe that owning a home is very necessary. Although owning yourself a home has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
First and foremost, people should recognize that owning a home is much more difficult than renting ones. Renting a home need less money and also easier because there are many kinds of home to rent at many different price for each subject. For example, students or graduates from urban area want to rent a home to go to school or work more convenient, they have many options of home at low price to make a choice. They also can share that home with others. By contrast, owning a home need a lots of money that not suitable for newcomers to work or students. Especially, in Viet Nam, the salary of government system still low for the population to owning themselves a home. Most of people who have their own house or flat are work in private companies or nongovernmental organizations. In addition, people can change their accommodation easily when they change their work place if they rent a home.
However, it is undeniable that owning yourself a home is more stable and suitable for nuclear of extended families. In my opinion, people give prominence to owning a home because they like the stable and want to have things for their own.
In conclusion, the important of owning a home still a controversial issue. I think owning or renting just a form of business, it do not have a large impact on people life.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...there are many kinds of home to rent at many different price for each subject. For example, st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...others. By contrast, owning a home need a lots of money that not suitable for newcomer...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 672, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...population to owning themselves a home. Most of people who have their own house or flat are wo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and want to have things for their own. In conclusion, the important of owning a...
^^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
... or renting just a form of business, it do not have a large impact on people life....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6679389313 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62401457303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3491473297 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261446236431 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11046819517 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436835101275 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184757283974 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246928881357 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...there are many kinds of home to rent at many different price for each subject. For example, st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...others. By contrast, owning a home need a lots of money that not suitable for newcomer...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 672, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...population to owning themselves a home. Most of people who have their own house or flat are wo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and want to have things for their own. In conclusion, the important of owning a...
^^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
... or renting just a form of business, it do not have a large impact on people life....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6679389313 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62401457303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3491473297 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261446236431 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11046819517 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436835101275 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184757283974 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246928881357 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.