There is no doubt that in a few nations people prefer to buy more second hand things than new ones. According to my view this trend has both the positive and negative impacts on the lives of people.
On the one hand, buying used things like impacts people positively in many ways. Firstly, in today’s fast paced world inflation is increasing day by day due to development of technology and every one could not afford the cost of new and innovative things. Therefore, people purchase pre- owned things to meet their desires as they can get those things in almost half price which sometimes benefit more than new ones. Secondly, almost everything is available as a second hand such as furniture, vehicles, electronic gadgets on least cost. That’s why, people love to buy old things and they also afraid that if there is any defect in any new thing they found after buying then it would be a waste of money. Finally, everything works properly if we use it on daily basis so people buy things which are already in use by anyone which provides not only affordability but also long use of goods.
On the other hand, along with positive this phenomenon also has some negative impacts. First of all, we can not get guarantees in exchange for buying used products as those are not ultimately new and already has used by someone. In addition to this, probably the old products has any big defect which makes second hand products less popular as well some people refuse to buy old things because of the fear of any kind of damage. Moreover, sometimes second hand goods do not work properly like new ones so there is no any advantage to people.
To conclude, although secondary goods has a lot of merits for people yet it has some demerits which restricts people to buy used products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66349206349 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36729202984 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0098087621 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383325017804 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144349145847 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743058266776 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253577279832 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596722456862 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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