In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while the other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?
"My house is my refuge, an emotional piece of architecture not a cold piece of convenience". Nevertheless, there are some issues remain irrevocable and as complex as even. t
The topic asserts that, does the benefits of buying house are more than the renting house? Through this essay, I will examine the question from both points of view.
On one side, of argument there are people who argued that disadvantages of renting house outweigh from the advantages of buying house? The main reason for believing this is that restrictions. Therefore, the some restrictions are set by the owner of house. However, the person cannot live in that house happily. Whereas, the another reason behind this the not proper security. Apart from that, there are some chances of less security in the renting house. A third point is that the rules, which made by the owner of the house however it is compulsory for the people to follow all rules and regulations.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposite case. In this the people who argued that the buying House have benefits. People often have the this opinion because the freedom. Therefore, the people have proper freedom in their own home. Apart from this, there is no any type of restrictions. A second benefit of buying house that is satisfaction. However, the world's one of the most peaceful place is the house. Nowadays, everywhere the noise pollution are most. So the people feel more satisfied on their own house.
In conclusion, there are number of answers of this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the renting house have more disadvantages like; lack of security, restrictions etc. Apart from this, the restrictions like the some rules made by the owner of house and its compulsion for the people who live on rent follow those rules.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... House have benefits. People often have the this opinion because the freedom. Therefore,...
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...eir own home. Apart from this, there is no any type of restrictions. A second bene...
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...t peaceful place is the house. Nowadays, everywhere the noise pollution are most....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90353697749 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68002910649 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9184548557 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3043478261 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5217391304 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447344904588 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121843040634 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118194961249 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245349431011 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928298153984 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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