In some countries people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting house have more advantage or disadvantage than buying a house?

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In some countries people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting house have more advantage or disadvantage than buying a house?

'house' is not only made by bricks, cements and other material because house is made up by the love, and co-operations of all family members. Nevertheless there are some issue remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. One such issue here is that which house is good for the people; renting house or buying a house? Through this essay I will examine the question from both point of view.

On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of renting house of considerably outweigh the disadvantages of buying a house. The main reason for believing this is that a person can easily explore. Without the tension of their own house.It is also possible to say that people are also increased their savings and used it on other purposes and easily fulfill the needs of their family members. With the help of renting house a person also gain new experience which is very helpful in his future. Furthermore people are gaining more knowledge.

On the other hand, It is also possible to make the opposing case it is often argued that is a difficult to buying a new house?. People have this opinion because it is very expensive to buy a new house because saving of people are very less. They had been not able to afford the cost of the new house.By buying a house people cannot easily relocate to the other places and unable to gain the experience and knowledge about the other countries and cities. A particularly best epitome is that in the Delhi the maximum people using the renting house because in the city property is very expensive so that people are unable to pay its price.

As we have there are number of answer to this question. On balance however I tend to believe that renting house is very beneficial for the those people who are doing job. When they will posted from one place to other they can easily shifted.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59696969697 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35055627123 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1348590616 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43702449752 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137305159484 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974367835231 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261184347953 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653716818636 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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