In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development.
It is true that, in this ultra-modern era, People has to do overtime to compete with fast face of life. There are significant reason behind this. Some section of society believe that is beneficial overall, while I personally believe that it has more drawback than benefit.
When we look behind this trend, to live the luxurious life in metro city is the prime reason behind this. Consequently employee and employer both have to work long hours a day to achieve hard deadline and unbeatable targets. Additionally, handsome salary make this happen to tie up employee with their hectic life in the corporate world. Moreover, people are living in nuclear family and family earning is not sufficient to meet modern life style and influence rate. This reason pull citizen toward overnight and weekend working.
When we look the benefit and drawback of this trend, its negative side is large that positive. This type of extra work make huge negative effect on family life, Personal life and family life could not handle with hectic schedule of today’s fast life. Anyone could not provide quality time with their family. By this that one has to secrify with personal and social relation. It will also make convers effect of personal health and mental condition. For example, according to research of Liverpool university, 76% of metro public are living under pressure of earning load and this is the prime reason to incremental of depression and suicide cases.
In conclusion, human become workaholic to compete modern life, while this disturb personal and social life which is more important, If we have not act judicially, we have to undergo with hard faceoff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...o city is the prime reason behind this. Consequently employee and employer both have to work...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'acted'.
Suggestion: acted
...which is more important, If we have not act judicially, we have to undergo with har...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04363636364 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46572269928 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4104394387 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143549796455 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515674610165 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307769910521 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886502804357 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427703058836 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.