Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matter that affect them.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
In this ultra-modern society, Younger are free to choose their daily view on what to eat, what to wear and what to watch, Several group of people opine on this view that this trend lead younger toward selfishness, while other section of people believe that children should take their own decision which will directly related to their study or carrier. While I personally believe that later view has more benefit.
When we looking former view, Youth should be free take their day to day life decision and independent to choose their daily meal, dress and source of enjoyment. This kind of freedom give him right to choose the best what they want, Parents has not throw their own decision on them for this some basic decision and support to take their own other important decision. However this kind of scenario not help to child but they become selfish and thought only for own, they even not thought for their source of input. For instance, rich kids do not thought about spending for their daily choice without thinking that how much afort required to achieve that.
On other hand when we examine later view, Younger generation should promote to take their life long decision on their own related to academic or professional career, this will help to be self-reliable on thir matter. Moreover, It will help them to improve their confidence and imagination power to tecal any kind of situation in future without any kind of dependency on other. Furthermore, it boost their reliance on their own and faith on their thought process.
In conclusion, I believe that younger society should free to take their important lifelong decision on their head with judiciously, it would make them more responsible. Rather than take selfish basic daily routine decision, which will not help longer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ctly related to their study or carrier. While I personally believe that later view ha...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thrown'.
Suggestion: thrown
...he best what they want, Parents has not throw their own decision on them for this som...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ake their own other important decision. However this kind of scenario not help to child...
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Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...of dependency on other. Furthermore, it boost their reliance on their own and faith o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94352159468 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3701658885 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2501320958 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279001034356 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115065698832 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648487664738 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176547153265 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210190233672 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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