In some countries people think women should have equality with men, in particular equal rights to work as police officer or serve in the army. Other think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that should the women have equality to do jobs in defense system as men or not? Through this essay I shall explore the dimensions of the topic through examples and illustrations and shaping up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that women should have equal rights to opt for military services. They strengthen their view points by claiming that equal participation of females in army or police department plays highly significant role in overall development of nation. A good illustration of this is Kiran bedi who has joined the police department committed to her work and do her duty with honesty.Moreover, to control crime in society women plays crucial role in it. Nowadays, we read massive crime cases in newspapers.Especially, related to girls.Therefore, it is mandatory for female gender to opt security services to overcome the problems of crime. Beside it, it provide self esteem to women.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that women are not appricable for doing such kind of services. To make their arguments by claiming that they were physically not strong as compare to men. As in military services individual would be physically fit to catch holder of the criminals. Moreover, psychologically it is proven by psychologist named Jean Piaget that females were emotionally weak. As a result, not able to handle criminal situations effectively.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options. I believe that there is no single conclusion. Still I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. So, no doubt women are emotionally not strong as men have but, in present scenerio, they should have equal opportunity to get high profile job in defense system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07396449704 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09728837312 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4682299953 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2631578947 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250585040194 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622091161097 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072264888251 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13612589411 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425554052846 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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