some countries spend large amounts of their health budgets on treatments.This many should be spent on prevent measured and health education instead.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
A large chunk of their health budget is utilized by some nations to provide treatment facilities.It is argued by some individuals that.This money needs to diverted toward creating health awareness and taking prevent steps.However,I only partially agree with this given assertion,my supporting aguments along with this rational there of are discussed in the following body paragraph.
spending on health education and preventive steps is vital in keeping the masses healthy.First and foremost,it has been obseved that is physical education most neglected part of heath care.If sufficient money is spent on advertisement and other such measures to generate awareness about proper diet,value of physical activities,appreciate life style extra. Then, may of the disease like fluentuating,blood pressure,hart ailments etc can be kept at day.Similarly,taking preventive also greatly reduce the outbrick of various disease.For instance,chemical fogging before the rain seasons can greatly reduce the risk of dengue,malaria.All these steps are possible helps proper funding only.
On the other hand,edquate funds are also required cures of provides various diseas.To commence with,there are still large number of illness like cancer,which may not be preventable through any percussions health consciousness.Many disease number birth also all this requires of hospitals and doctors.Moreover,in case of emergency like accident,proper setup, ambulances,physicians
need doctor cruical.This is possible only trough the allocation of edequate fund.
In conclusion,it apparent from the above discussion,that health education,preventive and proper treatment all form important constituent of health system of a nation .Therefore,there should be balanced distribution of funds in all these fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25506072874 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97221083477 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663967611336 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1207424033 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 309.0 106.682146367 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.4 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.2 7.06120827912 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235737209079 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115828407104 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518107737158 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110924201156 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502885474534 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.64 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.92 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.76 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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