some countries spend large amounts of their health budgets on treatments.This many should be spent on preventive measured and health education instead.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is no doubt health plays a vital role in human being life through few nations spend huge amounts of their health check and treatments in whole life.The root can be some older consider that offspring should need to physical exercise do in their life.I fully agree with this assertion.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant today adolescent must not interest to exercise as well as they never like out games.Therefore,juvenile most of time they is using many gadget .For instance,cell phone,computer,iPhone and tablet so on.After that,youngsters have careless about their fitness.Otherwise,youth have a lot of money spending of treatments while people do exercise but also might not want to spend earn on treatments.
Nevertheless,there is no denying that fact the,some person trust that everyone can do preventive in our life.In fact,fitness is very essential part of life.However,kids are delight and health so they would easily focus on all schedule.I thing that,everybody will do physical activities.For example,run,yoga, long jump,dance and extra.Last but not the least,in my mind,anyone do exercise in their life than they never treatment because they are very curious about their health.In my point of view,they must do check up of body in every year if they is superb influences of health.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand,health is very indispensable role play in whole day.Further,they need to awareness about health education in our life.On other hand,it is good impact of health and fitness.Thus,they do exercise they never illness in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41851851852 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72116071099 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.541472108 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.75 106.682146367 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.5 20.7667163134 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 7.06120827912 489% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21390448831 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134795423537 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513541383521 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134795423537 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513541383521 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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