Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion
The usage of bicycles has gain popularity in some countries. A number of these nations invest financially into easing the use bikes owing to factors such as curbing traffic congestion. I will analyze some reasons for this trend and state the best solution to traffic jams in this essay.
To begin with, it is evident why states will spend money on bicycles to improve it use. First , it helps keep the nation healthy. this is riding bikes provides a form of excellent exercise which keeps the individuals fit. The result is that physically and mentally sound citizens increases productivity for economic growth of the country. Secondly, it surely controls heavy traffic in the urban centres especially. As the number of people who prefers riding to driving cars increases , the number of cars on the street decreases thereby limiting traffic congestion.
Furthermore, there other environmental and economic reasons to fund the use of bikes. Global warming threatening our planet earth. One cause of the rise in this threat boils down to emissions of carbon dioxide by cars from the burning of fossil fuel. A limited use of vehicles due to bicycle use means less poisonous releasing into the atmosphere subsequently reducing this menace. Finally, the increasing transportation fares pose financial hardship to the common people. using bikes to travel to short distances lessens the economic burden.
To sum up, there are there are clear intents for states to spend a lot of monies on bicycles use. But in the advent of solving traffic congestion , the best antidote is to construct underground stations for metros. Trains in many countries are known for it value of traffic decongestion. I recommend that every country adopt this.
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I bet this essay will score a band score of 7 in ielta academic writing. Who agrees?
Essay evaluation report
The reason the e-grade gave it a low score because of this:
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
most likely the average length of sentences is short.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1415 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.018 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.641 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.518 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.454 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.008 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...l spend money on bicycles to improve it use. First , it helps keep the nation healt...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ney on bicycles to improve it use. First , it helps keep the nation healthy. this ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rst , it helps keep the nation healthy. this is riding bikes provides a form o...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t helps keep the nation healthy. this is riding bikes provides a form of excelle...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Riding
... keep the nation healthy. this is riding bikes provides a form of excellent exer...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... productivity for economic growth of the country. Secondly, it surely controls he...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...prefers riding to driving cars increases , the number of cars on the street decrea...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Using
...inancial hardship to the common people. using bikes to travel to short distances less...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'there are'.
Suggestion: there are
...ssens the economic burden. To sum up, there are there are clear intents for states to spend a lot...
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Line 8, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the advent of solving traffic congestion , the best antidote is to construct under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17730496454 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71705850037 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3468408228 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8421052632 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312994420418 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802072416663 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832831257906 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173277751905 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101749527189 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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