Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
A constitution to terminate smoking has been enacted by some countries especially in public place, such as offices and restaurants. This essay thus will describe some potential benefits and drawbacks.
Regarding the advantages, one main point is that the number of smoker would decrease. It has been widely known that smoking involves our body, such as lung and heart, at serious risk of being suffered from cancer. Hence, only after providing no-smoking public areas will smoker realize to suspend this activity or at least to limit their amount of time to smoke in order to regain health. Furthermore, it is certain that the ban of smoking in public would be beneficial for providing healthy environment especially for passive smoker. It means that this public regulation could prevent secondhand smoke and air pollution to be inhaled by others in free air. In another word, Lawful as smoking has been for entitlement, this activity should not be for forfeiting others’ human rights as non-smoker.
Turning to the disadvantages, it is apparent that banning smoking in public will pose some economic problems. One of those is that this law will raise unemployment level. This means that cigarette companies will wisely decide to dismiss their employees, if they economically declare bankrupt due to some trouble related to market share as an impact of reducing the number of tobacco smokers. In addition, this ban will further reduce the national income, especially for the tobacco-producing countries, which can be seen on agricultural and industrial sectors. This happens when the profit taxes from commercial-farming and industrial activities of tobacco fall down as well as a decrease in the level of producing and marketing cigarette.
Overall, it is reasonable to conclude that terminating smoking in public offers some health benefits for both active and passive smoker. Still, there will be some major drawbacks in economic sector that should be concerned.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, so, still, thus, well, at least, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92560619319 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7866022644 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188066020942 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730215593753 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703280563318 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13940906193 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065260709498 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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