In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some regions, many adults choose to have their first child when they become older. This essay will list the reasons for this phenomenon and explain why its disadvantages outweigh.
There are two reasons that cause some individuals to delay pregnancy until they are older. The first cause is due to women and men prioritizing their careers instead of becoming parents early. In some countries such as Japan, one of the most common reasons for couples to delay having a child until they become older is that they want to stabilize their careers and finances to prepare the best conditions for their children. Another factor is due to some people’s uncertainty about parental roles. Some young women and men might feel confused when considering having a child since there are many concerns and responsibilities for them to take. Consequently, this confusion might lead to the fear of not taking good care of their children, thereby making some couples choose to have a child at an older age.
Although this phenomenon has its benefits, I believe that its drawbacks have more impact. Delayed pregnancy is thought to allow parents to prepare financially and mentally for parenthood and provide their children with a so-called fulfilled life. However, these benefits cannot be as serious as a health threat to both mothers and children. Delayed pregnancy can increase maternal mortality rates and newborn babies’ susceptibility to Down syndrome. Moreover, it can lead to a generation gap between parents and children in life as they might find it difficult to catch up with their children’s lively activities due to old age or have conflicting opinions with their children due to different ways of thinking. This gap might lead to children suffering mentally as they cannot communicate or play freely with their parents.
In conclusion, priority for career and uncertainty before parenthood are the factors that prevent people from having a child at an early age. Moreover, I think that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages since they can cause health threats during gestation and a generation gap that worsens the relationship in the family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21264367816 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7655803014 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522988505747 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2159515559 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340511183888 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115792351545 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903907616033 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240733484529 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120602223432 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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