In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.
In few nations teenage people are motivated to do job or to migrate for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. In my point of view it's a good thing for the teenagers to do work and migrate for a year.
To begin with, the young people's who had completed there high school studies and want to migrate to other countries for further studies. The main reason for the students is that they will be in a new country in which they can do jobs and pay their own fees and earn extra money for their other expenses and they don't have to be dependent on their parents for money, as well as when the students are migrating to a new country they will make new friends in the area and the university. Therefore students should be motivated to work and migrate to other countries.
On the other hand the students are going to have problem which are migrating to other countries such as they are not aware of the rules and regulations of the country and the New places. The main reason is that they to do their work themselves and they don't have their family to help them. Overall the students suffer from these difficulties by changing their city or doing job's.
In conclusion students are the future of the nation, where country should support the teenage people for doing job's or to migrate other nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53112033195 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30475421962 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473029045643 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7035381262 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274019571284 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140258492262 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118886482654 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191309531595 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105618002305 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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