The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Nuclear energy is most economical and cleanest way to produce power. Sometimes it is also used as nuclear weapons. The warning of nuclear weapons keeps world peace. Nuclear energy is the cheapest and clean medium to produce energy. In my opinion, I disagree that advantages of nuclear technology far outweigh the negative aspects.
To begin with, benefits of nuclear energy it is very much helpful and useful in production of electricity. Large amount of electric power is generated by nuclear power station. Nuclear power generating station is considered as the most economical energy generating station. By using small amount of nuclear energy large sum of electricity is produced without investing large quantity of money. It is also as renewable source of power by using that many non-renewable sources are conserved.
On the other hand, it have many negative aspects than compare to benefit. Firstly, nuclear energy contains big quantity of uranium which is not safe for human body. For example nuclaer has radiation which can be harmful for people and which deteriorate human health. Secondly, some nations also use it as a chemical bomb can be called as nuclear weapon. For instance in year 1945 American dropped bomb on city Hiroshima-Nagasaki. Where many of them lost their lives. The impact of that bomb is still their and children over their are now seen having disabilities.
To conclude, nuclear energy has more disadvantages than compare to advantages and it do not outweigh the benefits. Hence, nuclear energy source should be used by taking precautions and safety measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22265625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77463387488 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4343918807 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3684210526 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330219642174 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112310135169 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728458927946 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22005317405 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906940542432 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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