In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?
Admittedly, most of the countries the young people are enjoying their life without any woes and desps apart from that they are influenced on work or long travel to other countries after completing their high school and before starting university curriculum. However, this view considered as either constructive or destructive.
To begin with, there are some advantages to make the young people to live like free bird or permitted to work in between their studies. Firstly, for work they can be an independent and earn money for further life to obtain the great achievements. Secondly, for travelling a year they are totally involved in fantasy world even though, to make a creative mind and will raise memory power and progress their communication level in conjured manner. Instantaneously, one of my cousin he has completed his higher secondary education then he went to Singapore for a tour or journey further, he settled there indeed, he got a good job under Singapore government.
Ostensibly, the opponents the statement regardless of some disadvantages in part. However, after finishing studies some of the younger people will go for any job which is not qualified as academically, owing to that, this is a great impact for their future. The trend has been changed tremendously, at contemporary. Moreover, they are more oriented about the money they will not progress in academic knowledge. Perhaps, the parents are giving extra freedom and they will forcefully to send for travel in this case they will take as a challenge further, they plan to enter into the crew of rebellions into order to make brutalities to the public. Consequently, they may create harm or threats to the society as a part of mental defects, in the sense unless the parents ignore to take an action against this. As an illustration, my neighbour after his completion of school education he went for a job indeed, he is not pay an attention for future studies still, he is under a frmer job the value of education is neglected him.
To conclude, we should keep some restrictions among young people that is a paradigm and not allowed to do any rejuvenated behaviour. Hence, this may influence to do particular own decisions whatever their perceptions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
... into the crew of rebellions into order to make brutalities to the public. Consequently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03234501348 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91478247444 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56064690027 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8106148142 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.466666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305662353793 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925068934322 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789985243343 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185689743896 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327759151468 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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