In some countries young people are excouroged worker or travels for one year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss the advantage for young people who decide to do his.
Study is very important in every person to gain knowledge. One of the most controversial issues today relates to some countries and young people are worker or travel ecceptable to one year gap. In this essay , I am going to examine this question from both point of views. Who argue that advantages while considerable out weight disadvantages.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the young people are increases experies day by day. It is also possible to say that in people can earn money and one year extra to go to travel for people every person to gain knowledge day by day. One good illustration of this is next year can deposit the money and he relaxed feel . All countries can travel to her. He can usually money and travel to with her. He can reste in at time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45517241379 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46425695865 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.282184257 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289212270334 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101574770469 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100455597813 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224835373775 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00848725600703 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.