Nowadays, some countries encounter with the rapid growth of obesity among their citizens and consequent decrease in the level of health and fitness. There are some factors behind these problems, including lack physical practice, and using fast food permanently can be the most important causes. Fortunately, there are several solutions for dealing with these problems than can be used by people and governments.
The foremost cause for prevailing overweighting and its side effects (health problem) in many societies is regardless of permanent exercise. According to the last research carried out by the University of Tehran, the people who suffer from obesity occasionally exercise so that their monthly average is lower than one hour. Also, it can be seen in some schools, tutors don’t care about physical courses, and this issue leads to overweighting in pupils.
Moreover, the tendency of the people to intake junk food are rising. The reason for this tendency may come back to their lifestyle due to they have a hectic life and don’t have enough time to cook healthy food. Besides, it is essential to have special skills for cooking nutritious food, and this issue converts people to go to restaurants and to eat unhealthy food like pizza.
Fortunately, this problem can be eradicated by changing style life and appropriating funds. It is inevitable that the most efficient prescribe for any problem is changing behavior and lifestyle. For instance, some scientists believe that this problem (obesity) is only because of lack of proper planning. Furthermore, assigning enough budget for encouraging people to cook a home-made meal can reduce utilizing fast food among people.
To conclude, encouraging people to eat more healthy food and also doing more physical activities will not improve their health but also help people to lose their weight.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3186440678 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74082837653 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7587717703 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186911547212 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661209370933 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401507927659 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109884942049 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506557324542 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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