In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage

It is irrefutable that children are the touch bearers of the future. From the early stage of life parents, relatives are often told us that nothing is impossible to achieve if you roll up your sleeves to do the task. This message can be advantageous to children as it motivates them and encourages them to chase their dreams. However, it may cause some negative consequences.

On the one hand, this message is beneficial to young generations in many ways. Children usually have a lot of dreams since they are at the beginning of their lives and they think everything is possible. When adult encourages them to pursue their passion and believe in them, it pushes them to become the best version of themselves through working hard and staying positive. Moreover, the second benefit is that it keeps motivated when they fail. In other words, when children grow into adulthood and start chasing their dreams, they will surely encounter hardships. If they previously thought that persistence and hard work will get them through, they will not give up easily and stay motivated also they will try to find out different ways to reach that particular goal.

On the other hand, it can have some disadvantages which can have an adverse effect. Firstly, due to believing they can achieve whatever he wanted he will set unrealistic goals, for instance, they may think that they can be millionaires at age of fifteen and when they fail to accomplish they start suffering from mental health such as depression. Moreover, children push themselves to their limit and work too hard which affects negatively them. This can be exemplified by children who study all the time dreaming to be topper in class but, if the result will come out of the moon they will start suffering from depression, anxiety, and isolation.

To sum up, although it is beautiful to tell children they can achieve which it is beneficial because they work hard and never give up but, also it may cause issues such as depression, anxiety, and burnout.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59705752215 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0954080835 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365990985372 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117408223369 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604243800799 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231541301913 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277046335906 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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