Some employers want to be able to contact their staffs at all times, even on holidays.
Does this development have more advantage than disadvantages?
Nowadays, it seems that more employees have to work for long hours and do over-time. Some employers have their own rules and are likely to find their staffs during the days even in holidays. However, in my opinion it is not a right approach because of a wide range of problems will emerge for labors. This essay intends to discuss both advantages and disadvantage as follows.
Firstly, in the stressful world the majority of people may spend several hours in job places in front of the various machines and computers. As a result, when they find themselves at home prefer to relax and socialize with other people especially their families. Nevertheless, the risk of depression remarkably increase while the employers constantly contact them. In some developed countries like Japan the rate of suicide is absolutely high due to endless pressure of work and often workers should be in touch with their bosses. Consequently, the hectic life style is the only achievement obtained by this trend.
On the other hand, it is fully true that the employees demand much wage when they sacrifices their leisure times for career. In other words, the quality of life raises dramatically in term of financial issues. Besides, it prepares an appropriate opportunity for individuals to get promotion as long as they make a good relationship with owners of the companies. However, the rate of family breaks significantly grow which lead to emotional difficulties in marital life when they have no conversation with each other.
To sum it up, in my perspective the demerits of this trend far weigh its merits and it is essentially vital to make a balance between the job and other aspects of life including spending time with loved ones or having pastime in some days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'sacrifice'
Suggestion: sacrifice
...he employees demand much wage when they sacrifices their leisure times for career. In othe...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed ones or having pastime in some days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98639455782 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7597256911 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5069022006 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213826804289 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662850132245 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755213220449 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123696808062 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095028275843 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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