Some employers want to be able to contact their staffs at all times, especially holidays. Does this approach has more advantages than disadvantages?
Technology has made communication so easy that it’s just the matter of few clicks in order to connect with someone. These advancements have paved its way to the corporate world, opening a new window of facilitating employers to connect with their staff. In my opinion, this approach has more advantages despite being annoying sometimes.
First of all, employers want their staff to obey their orders and implement them as soon as possible. In order to do that, most of the superiors tend to connect with them even in holidays because they want to make their staff ready for the upcoming challenges and eventually the employees can get enough time to organize their future tasks. Hence, mutual connection between both of them can make sure that there is no hindrance in the working schedule and the productivity can be increased to a certain extent.
Furthermore, especially during the holidays there are more chances of mishaps in any industry. While the working professionals are enjoying some great times with their loved ones doing their favorite things, they have a certain responsibility towards their firm. In addition, one of the motive of employers is to remind them of those duties. Hence, in terms of unfortunate incidents, the connection between the employers and staff plays a vital role in controlling and preventing those kind-of situations. Taking an instance of an hospital, where many patients require assistance during the night, staffs require to coordinate with the doctors in order to help the patients.
Undoubtedly, frequent contact between the superiors and employees is also irritating. It has long been proven that work-life balance is an important factor in order to make the employers happy and increases their efficiency. Staffs, when contacted in their breaks often get dissatisfied with their work which results in a poor quality of output. In addition, the positive professional relation between both of them may get abated.
To sum it up, I believe that a certain connection should be maintained between the working professionals for the aforementioned benefits. Although, the significant connection can lead to negative effects on the staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34195402299 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8871231786 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9232839435 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251493835738 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781837792594 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653915668249 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129121468716 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501148032006 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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