Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, learning foreign language is important for every person. Many people believe that student can start to learn a foreign language in primary schools compared with secondary schools. There are both advantages and disadvantages, but I opine that there are more benefits outweigh than drawback, which will be discussed with assisting example in this essay.
To begin with, There are various advantages of learning a foreign language in primary school. Firstly, student can learn about basic rules in very early age and after primary school, which can expert in this language. For example, nowadays which student learn in English medium school are more expert in the language of English compared to other schools. Secondly, Which student can learn a foreign language in early age, which are easily capture their rules and regulation. It can be seen that Grammatical accuracy and pronunciation are easily carried by primary schools rather than secondary schools.
However, on the flip side of coin there few drawback is also available of these topic. First of all, student can face more education burden for carrying more subject in primary schools. For example, Primary student can learn around 4-5 subject in their study, but any subject improved then they do not easily focus in every subjects, as a result they are realized a weak in their subjects.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding learn a foreign language, as far as I am concerned that learning in primary school which is more knowledge in foreign subject as well as more rules and regulation learn in early age, whereas student can face education burden in primary schools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'captured'.
Suggestion: captured
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'few drawbacks'.
Suggestion: few drawbacks
...However, on the flip side of coin there few drawback is also available of these topic. First...
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Message: Did you mean 'this topic' or 'these topics'?
Suggestion: this topic; these topics
...there few drawback is also available of these topic. First of all, student can face more ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60707191684 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9589558689 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335743811512 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151117723652 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100784322468 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215340350493 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100124184982 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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