The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods. Do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people are more competition with their relative as well as friends. Many people argue that due to the fashion, people are being more showcase with each other. however, my point of view, I completely agree with this statement with reasonable answer.
First of all, nowadays people are following different celebrity for different areas.It can be seen that if any famous person can start to wear new outfit, then behind many fans also want to this product for daily routing. For example, a survey done by Times of India shows that almost 80% teenager followed their favourite celebrity in last year and importantly they always brought this product, which could be tried by celebrities.
Secondly, many people have also followed famous person in their daily life. It can be said that many company are hire of famous people for their company's product brand ambassador, which can help to improve sell of product. For example, Sharukh khan is the brand ambassador of the company of Hyundai. Due to this reason, most of fans of this actor mostly prefer to Hyundai's car for their daily routing. Consequently, they do not consider about their budget, but only followed their actor/actoress.
Last but not least, nowadays digital media create a big role for person's life. It can say that people are also follow the celebrity in digital networking sites as Instragram, Facebook and many others. If any celebrity's fan can see new electronic gadget on these site, then must to try this product. For example, my friends also ordered of smart watch after seeing this advertisement by his favourite actor.
In recapitulation, due to the more usage of internet, people have preferred more shopping rather than past, because of they must follow their famous person in digital platform as well as due to advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...re being more showcase with each other. however, my point of view, I completely agree w...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...different celebrity for different areas.It can be seen that if any famous person c...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the fans') or simply say ''most fans''.
Suggestion: most of the fans; most fans
...company of Hyundai. Due to this reason, most of fans of this actor mostly prefer to Hyundais...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...w electronic gadget on these site, then must to try this product. For example, my frien...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...eferred more shopping rather than past, because of they must follow their famous person in digi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03548387097 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61569146335 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0675724554 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0391848558073 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163818339975 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279809331629 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0232629784583 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02397165538 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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