some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, the phenomenon of learning a foreign language and its corresponding impacts have sparked massive debates. Apart from numerous advantages of learning a second language by elementary school children, some scientists are of the opinion that dealing with foreign language should be started at older ages. In my view, the merits of learning foreign languages at ages under eleven can be considered in terms of both the learning ability of children and psychological effects. However, we shouldn’t lose sight of its demerits.
Obviously, a remarkable number of education systems in all around the world commence the process of being familiar with other languages at preschools. Because young children are capable to learn at outstanding speed, researchers incline to begin at the age of seven or so. In terms of evolution, these children can easily handle techniques of learning another language.
Moreover, psychologically speaking, learning two separate languages at the same time as early as elementary school period end up to enhance pupils’ social skills. They have the opportunity to acquire the ability of interaction with a wider range of people in a second language learning process. Thus, pupils can promote speaking abilities even at their mother tongue. In realm of psychology, psychologists have asserted that being bilingual lead to improve self-esteem of pupils.
On the other hand, other experts claim that the downsides of learning a foreign language at elementary schools far outweigh its benefits. They suggest children should start this process from secondary schools. This group experts have a number of explanations such as children’ original language structures are hard-wired in their minds. Consequently, learning a new language in this stage don’t interfere with their mother tongue. Besides, pupils don’t need to struggle with adaptation issues, for example, baffling on vocabularies of both languages because their native vocabularies are transferred into their unconscious mind.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on cons and pros of a specific age in which children should launch a foreign language, I opt vigorously support the idea that the age around seven is the best one. Eventually, is it possible to forget our mother tongue in the process of learning foreign languages?
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...of people in a second language learning process. Thus, pupils can promote speaking abil...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51955307263 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94430368523 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5952200347 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317608127887 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983865381969 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710938200545 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171752611094 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686528284501 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...of people in a second language learning process. Thus, pupils can promote speaking abil...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51955307263 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94430368523 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5952200347 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317608127887 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983865381969 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710938200545 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171752611094 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686528284501 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.