Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of various types of punishments and its corresponding impacts have sparked a philosophical as well as religious dispute. In this regard, whereas some people believe that the death penalty is inevitable to prevent crimes, others are of the opinion that governments should control increasing violence in the society by means of other kinds of punishments rather than capital one. In my mind, nowadays capital punishment is not as necessary and essential as the past, while penalty death would be replaced by other less severe punishments.
First of all, what is the purpose of enormous kinds of punishments? The answer may be twofold. One, we like criminals and offenders to be disappeared from the community. Second, we hope they, criminals, would become useful individuals in their societies as well as turn them into more philanthropist people. Moreover, execution of people, who commit such crimes as robbery or raping, paves the way arouse revenging emotions amongst their heirs.
Undoubtedly, it is the matter of humanity that whether officials along with low-makers are allowed to deprive individuals from living through capital punishment? By killing people because of their crime to control violence across societies, it is more likely that such shocking incidents, that is, beholding someone to be hung, will be an everyday scenery between communities. Thus, it would lose the efficiency and preventative measures to spread security around the borders of the countries.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of death penalty advocators. In their view, men or women who commit huge, unbelievable crimes, like assassination are not eligible to be alive. Ergo, governors must take exploiting more severe punishments such as death penalty or solitary confinement into consideration. Loads of people believe the death penalty thanks to religions which they follow. For instance, among Moslems this type of punishment is widely accepted, while such Moslem countries as Arabian nations are utilizing it ever-increasing.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea that applying the death penalty is far from acceptable. Who knows a juvenile that committed a crime, would turn into a leading scientist through using more sympathetic punishment instead of the most ultimate one (the death penalty)?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44324324324 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95731009201 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6551632484 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28702962746 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759063711389 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713069676267 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150332456662 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851557496547 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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