Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The following essay looks at both sides of the argument that the death penalty is necessary to keep our society under control. I completely agree with the view that without capital punishment we will become vulnerable to violence.
To start with, it is significantly said that some citizens will not support to let execution gain the best method to curb violence. Firstly, if a murderer has experienced of mental sickness, which means he or she will not be able to control their behaviours, some innocent people would be wrongly convicted and executed. Secondly, people who unpredictably commit the crime due to a lack of awareness do not serve to receive the death sentence. For example, an adolescent wants to return a bag to its owner but he was finally convicted of capital punishment as the bag contained more than 5 kilograms of drugs. In those cases, the death penalty is deemed too violent to punish a crime.
However, I believe that there are several times when it becomes essential to enforce the death sentence in society. Especially when we talk about a pathological criminal who is a serial killer or terrorist, capital punishment is the most effective method to make a sense of safety and security for residents. If the offenders do not face the death penalty, the court is not done to the victims and their families. On top of that, this will lead to counteracts of violence with revenge. Another factor to consider is that by imposing more serve punishments, the death sentence particularly on the lawbreakers, the government basically serves as a deterrent against similar unlawful activities. For instance, IS terrorism had been a terrible nightmare for the residents, until the government enforce the execution of members of the organisation, and the number of terrorists dropped by more than half.
To sum up, despite imposing the death penalty on a national law may lead to several conflicting opinions, it is still an efficient solution to control crimes and make the world a better place to live in.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'counteract'.
Suggestion: counteract
...lies. On top of that, this will lead to counteracts of violence with revenge. Another facto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, to start with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98235294118 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8464753899 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1856948229 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276257642526 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852214418565 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611763374571 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158677141823 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601655765406 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'counteract'.
Suggestion: counteract
...lies. On top of that, this will lead to counteracts of violence with revenge. Another facto...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, to start with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98235294118 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8464753899 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1856948229 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276257642526 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852214418565 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611763374571 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158677141823 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601655765406 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.