Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

It is generally considered that few experts ponder that it is good for toddler to starting gaining a international languages at elementary school rather than high institute. This essay will examine the more benefits than its drawbacks.

To commence with demerit that children under pressure in their early age. To explain it, when they learn these kinds of languages they under depression or depressed because they can not handle the burden of more study. Also, they can affected by many mind diseases. As a result, they can not learn the foreign language with this burden and also they can confuse in their mother language.

Shifting towards with merits of this notion, youngster can doing any hard thing. To elaborate it, they learn the international language as soon in starting age and they gain the more knowledge about the social networking. Also, they can talking on the social site in any language and they can doing the any difficult work on the websites and write the any thing in any language. For example, a Japan found in 2016 that one toddler who had knowledge the all language in their elementary and solved the networking issue of America site. Hence, they can gain the information all over the world with the help of different languages.

In addition to this, one more advantages is that they can elevate their culture and traditions. In other words, they learn the foreign languages and with this they can explain their culture and traditions to other nation of individuals in their language and other people respect their culture and also trying to doing traditions work of them. For instance, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES NEWSPAPER" revealed one of the Indian company employee was working in Canadian company and talked about their dancing culture and other Canadian employees were listen their talked careful and they joined the same dance classes. Therefore, they can have their customs respected from international pupils.

In conclusion, although it is dangerous for children, yet it is beneficial for their knowledge and also their customs.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11918604651 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5897736834 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3390197355 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15012137682 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593325112897 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554403058093 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107709040239 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647879331099 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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