Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school.
Which of these two school policies you think is better?
It is clear that the recent debate on whether school uniform should be compulsory or not does not seem to come to an end any time soon. Although wearing casual clothes are considered more convenient for students and families, on the big picture, school uniform offers a myriad of other significant benefits.
There are a number of reasons why wearing a school uniform is doing a lot of good. First, since the aim of having uniforms is to reduce the differences among students’ background, friendship among schoolchildren would be tightened. For example, by having the same outfit among all students, those who are either rich or poor will be hard to know and recognize, which allows friendly healthy relationships to be developed. Secondly, since the schools want to ensure the quality of their educational programs, children will be encouraged to be less reliant on their appearance. This means that schoolchildren can save time on choosing what to wear to school as they would have more time to think about their lessons and exams, which benefits them in future career path.
Permitting students to wear what they like does more harm than good. First, if students are allowed to wear casual clothes, they would waste a large amount of money from their parents. This would have a variety of negative impacts on families’ finance as parents would have to work harder to earn more money, which also means less time spending on playing with their children. Moreover, students might wear inappropriate clothes to schools in order to show their personalities. This means that either short skirts or high heels would be worn at schools although they are not suitable for the educational environments, which leads to negative impacts on the images of schools in the public’s eyes.
In conclusion, school uniform offers more advantages for both individuals and families than casual clothes. Therefore, all schools should take steps to ensure that their students are wearing the same outfits without the exception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11515151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69863755034 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3681260844 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355784828604 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14646472248 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821065017605 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250986153477 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249085632293 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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