Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
People have different views about advertising is a key part of modern business. Personally, I support the idea that some TV shows, TV channels use bad, unethical and unacceptable advertisements. The purpose of this essay is to analyze the controversy in more depth.
There are several reasons why I believe that some advertisements have sexy and violent scenes which can encourage people to bad behavior. One reason for this is that increasingly crime such as family violent abused crime. For instance, Advertisement companies more attractive to the younger generation because they are easily influenced. As a result, they pressure their parents to buy expensive things. Now children forget our culture, and they are using western culture more. Therefore, sometimes they are using immoral and intolerant things in advertisements.
One cannot deny that the competition in the advertising world is pretty drastically even some companies resort to inappropriate means to make their products. Especially when we consider that is the lack of untruthful when the faulty information about a product provided for consumers. We can see this everywhere from inaccurate pictures of food to false promises on health supplements. There is also a tendency to use the demonstration to attract people or make people laugh. However, these characterize may be racist or sexist and give to a decline in social harmony. Additionally, the may also damage the company’s reputation.
In conclusion, advertising is serving a useful purpose as they help businesses to sell their products. But at the same time, over advertising and use, unethical ways is unacceptable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43579766537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19892637442 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6497570086 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184829373279 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533748501547 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404644198692 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120772949513 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439556787267 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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