Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays some companies believe that their staff members should dress smartly. However, others value that quality of work above appearance. my opinion to say that both have necessary to required in organisations. Morever, a quality can impact on the organisations and object to reach the desired goal.
On the first side men and women before goes in his or her job, be bare with a look and well-dressed it means in a company some ethic management rules follow to his employees like formal wear is suit in orgainsations an enviornment. Sometimes
in mostly all companies has participated big events and seminars conduct so that time staff member should well-dressed because this dressed has to judge by our personality.
When comes to talk quality is a vital role play in a company better than a good outfit. Certainly being a well-dressed person look goods but imagine without quality what? our knowledge is our motto we identify to our quality image not being a good outfit. Most precious example understand that Mahendra Singh Dhoni is former captain to our Indian cricket team it known as cool captain quality or wicket-kipping we know him. I would like to talk about my advised of people sometimes if have not well dressed up but his quality is a colorful and sound way those people always play important role in orgainsations and also certainly achieve the desired goal for him and comapny.
To sum up my above points last but not least being good person means not like look like handsome but if his background is full of water in jug means very knowledgable his result in his company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84981684982 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72115072585 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8082230593 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203331235437 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923786981527 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098785871638 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12466250463 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142558781932 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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