Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay topics:

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.

Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Submitted by dhavaljo15 on Sun, 08/04/2019 - 03:04

In the modern era, the internet role is vital. people can do everything from buying to selling within less time help with the internet. Before the internet time our ancestor not aware of these things but in the 21st century, the internet has changed the world. Now I would like to talk about some pros and cons of the internet.
First and foremost people are not like the congested area when goes to the market of shopping, However, the internet has made it easy options for people to anywhere and any corner to operate it and do the buy things whatever he wants.
secondly is the time now in the world the time is a precious thing of a human being. Let's take one example to understand big basket website it is handy means service providers at the doorstep delivery of vegetables many varieties are available at this website. this is one website I told but its wide choices are available of people for shopping like clothing, groceries, selling items many others are available at the moment in the world.
on the other side, the internet of people can rapidly be buying things but some fraud has done wrong against people.
Particularly in clothing website people what made an order and what get order some time internet of a human being like a barrier. Let's another example to understand some website are hacked a hacker who has a hacked website the purpose of earn money so be careful when we do shopping online Because our personal data has misplaced.\
To agglomeration above my points the internet has boon and bane of people but be aware when doing shopping or any other things because chances to come fraud it is not happening with us do not share our personal data.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
...modern era, the internet role is vital. people can do everything from buying to sellin...
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...to anywhere and any corner to operate it and do the buy things whatever he wants....
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Suggestion: Secondly
...d do the buy things whatever he wants. secondly is the time now in the world the time i...
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Suggestion: Let's
...e is a precious thing of a human being. Lets take one example to understand big bask...
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Suggestion: This
...arieties are available at this website. this is one website I told but its wide choi...
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Suggestion: On
... available at the moment in the world. on the other side, the internet of people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62876254181 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34965483476 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.6954038746 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158835530104 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06555444948 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300216627474 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902403563652 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288812624871 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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