Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays the popularity of shopping online is growing rapidly. Shopping online has more advantages and a few disadvantages. This essay shows that how advantages of online shopping supersede the disadvantages of shopping online and also my personal experiences about using internet to buy things.
We can buy almost everything by just staying at home and even the prices of most of the products are lower than in the market and it is also time saving. We just have to search for the product we want to buy and have to give our address. Mostly we have payment on delivery options but sometimes we also have to pay via credit card. Is not it great that we did not have to go anywhere and we are going to get the stuff we needed. It will not just only save our but also the money we have to spent on fares or gas of our vehicle.
With all these benefits online shopping still have some disadvantages. People get fraud a lot by shopping online. They order one thing and they get something else. Although it is not always, getting more popular every day. However with every passing online shopping is getting more secure and free of frauds. Still some people do not prefer to buy online as they want to see the product live and want to feel it with their otherwise they do not know what to buy. Mostly it is the case with wearable products such as clothes and shoes.
With all these pros and cons I think that online shopping is great method of shopping and I know sometimes we do not get satisfied but most of the times it is a great way to shop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...getting more secure and free of frauds. Still some people do not prefer to buy online...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: sometimes know
...pping is great method of shopping and I know sometimes we do not get satisfied but most of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.393728223 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33315266429 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498257839721 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0308301541 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8125 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144339826333 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583179974134 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482040450964 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100454182073 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054738682551 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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