As a result of deforestation and illegal hunting, many animal species are
becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is
important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?
When the dinosaurs and woolly mammoths went extinct, it was considered to be a
natural process or perhaps the result of a natural disaster. These days, however,
many species are on the brink of extinction as a direct result of human activities
including logging and poaching. This essay will discuss why I feel that it is important
to protect animals and suggest two ways to do so.
Animal conservation needs to be a global priority. This is because the loss of one
species can have catastrophic knock-on effects for others and even for entire
ecosystems. Take wolves as an example. Although it may seem counterintuitive, the
presence of this apex predator in the wilderness helps to maintain balance. They prey on sick or weak deer, which helps to keep that population healthier overall, and this predation also controls the number of grazing animals; when they are too abundant, soils can become degraded and other species will suffer. In other words,
preserving one species keeps the entire ecosystem balanced.
When it comes to the prevention of extinction, two strategies can be implemented.
The first is to preserve habitat, which is crucial when it comes to ensuring a species’
long-term viability. To do this, urban sprawl and development in general must be
curbed to reduce deforestation, which is a major cause of species loss. Another
measure involves getting tougher on illegal hunters. If more surveillance was
available in problem areas such as Nepal where tigers are hunted for their organs
and bones, then more hunters could be apprehended. Harsher penalties such as
imprisonment could then serve as a warning to other poachers.
In conclusion, animal extinction can have serious ramifications for the environment.
To prevent it, governments need to both preserve habitat and punish offenders
effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in general, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41836734694 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96679761733 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9654220151 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7058823529 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233219633043 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063966000211 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494958160806 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598491384176 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467081009384 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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