Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
how might having a lot of money make people happy?
what other things in life can make people happy?
There is no doubt that happiness plays an important role in human life. There are a lot of factors that control that feeling. However, some people believe that money is the main source of happiness. In this essay, I am going to discuss the reasons behind that believe and illustrate with examples the other factors that could make people delighted.
Nowadays, for some people, money is the only way to achieve their dreams, and the reason for that is everything has a price, so having a lot of money means that you are able to fulfill all your dreams which eventually lead to happiness. For example, if your dream is to become an engineer, you should have that amount of money to cover your education fees. In the end, accomplishing this dream will make you feel happy.
Money is not the only item of making people happy. Such Things like, living parents, having a child, which money cannot afford, have long life happiness and a substantial impact on people's life. Living at a quiet, charming, dazzling house also could make some people happy. For instance, the famous football player Messi is living a happy life due to having billions of money, beautiful kids, and a great house to live in.
To conclude, Money have a great impact on people life, not just make them feel happy, but also achieves their dreams. Other things like living parents, having a child, a beautiful house, play a vital role in living a happy life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74501992032 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27073459817 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5087724527 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6153846154 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470632367674 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169224075293 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835154761138 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293350224897 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936935677972 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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