You have decided to leave your job, write to your employer the following
- why you want to leave
- when you are planning to leave
- What did you like on your job
Dear Mr. Ahmed,
I am writing to let you know that I have decided to resign from your organization because u have received a better job offer from a multi-national company with a well-paid salary. Which means a high quality of life to me and my family.
According to my contract with your corporate, it mentioned that the notice period is one month from the notification day. Nevertheless, I would like to spend two months to initiate and complete the hand over process, so please suggest the person to start immediately. I will wait for this information in your reply email.
I have some positive comments about your company. Firstly, however, the low salaries policy that you are following with your employees, you promote your workers to work safely as well as providing safe and reliable equipment, besides maintaining a safe workplace. Secondly, the issue that encouraging me at the beginning to join your firm, the teamwork spirit between the workers and that has helped me a lot in learning the job responsibilities fast and increased my career experience.
I hope the best for you and your company in the future. I will wait for your confirmation on my resign.
Best regards
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Ahmed, I am writing to let you know that I have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ality of life to me and my family. According to my contract with your corpo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s information in your reply email. I have some positive comment about your ...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salaries'' or 'salary's'?
Suggestion: salaries'; salary's
... your company. Firstly, however the low salaries policy that you following with your emp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96517412935 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96416390684 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7727136391 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307665499005 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104938282426 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865083445187 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191026732929 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656492634874 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.