Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, some people prefer to buy something from the online market. For example, outfits, tickets, and meals. It is very easy and saves time and money. The Internet’s product can cheaper than the shop’s product. Because they do not pay rent’s money. Therefore, some people prefer to make an order from the office room and home. But it has two sides.
On the one hand, women usually book goods on the internet. Because they are totally busy and the internet can save their time. Such as my mom really likes to buy something online and she does not like going shopping. She usually buys exercise tools, clothes, and sometimes she buys food. Last week, she bought medicine and she had totally satisfied.
On the other hand, all products selling on the internet are not enough quality. For example, I bought trousers for my son last summer. Unfortunately, that product did not enjoy it for me. They had written that 100% cotton. But that trousers had nylon material and it is very bad for kid’s skin. Because my son has an allergy. Thus, I requested to back and the online market’s owner did not allow. Then I have been saving those trousers. Finally, I decided that I do not buy anything again from the internet. I think that many people like me.
In conclusion, the online market’s advantages and disadvantages are not compared to things. Because everybody has different minds and people summarize another about it. In my opinion, online orders just suitable for a few kind’s products. Such as, delivery meal and tickets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95437262357 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6246925483 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6526042058 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.1153846154 106.682146367 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1153846154 20.7667163134 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096872235755 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256974413401 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348398893336 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060333448133 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119466503723 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.95 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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