Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, All kinds of sport have been developing and teenagers and adults have been learning to free time. Also, follow it athletes have been parting in many kind’s matches. Many athletes in my country had a part in event of Olympia and the world’s championship. But some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like basketball, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or running, is better. I think that my country is a more developed team sport.
Recently, children preferred to stay at home while playing video games that learn to some sports. Instead of sitting behind a computer all day, they should join a sports club and some events. Thus, kids would become a self-reliant, brave, strong, and personal organization. If its team’s sport to do, do not study selfish behavior and it would be a sticker to that team’s other members with the mind. But, athletes to learn to individual sport is matters to himself all thing and they do not have allowed to do mistakes. All things would cause them.
In my opinion, I do not think that this sport is the best or worse. Sport is a sport. Due to being athletes, they need to exercise patience and spend it for a long time. Therefore, we do not need to judge this problem, and we must help athletes who have been glorying the country’s name. I think that the government encourages athletes to get achievement more successful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80155642023 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68008378542 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.114729683 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307463120961 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976838107175 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177288494481 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202006638346 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161754917504 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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