Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, some people prefer to buy something from online market. For example, outfits, tickets and meal. It is very easy and save time and money. Internet’s product can cheaper than shop’s product. Because they do not pay rent’s money. Therefore, some people prefer make to order from office room and home. But it has two sides.
On the one hand, women usually book goods from the internet. Because, they are totally busy and internet can save their time. Such as my mom really like to buy something from online and she does not like going shopping. She usually buys exercise’s tools, clothes, and sometimes she buys foods. Last week, she bought medicine and she had totally satisfied.
On the other hand, all products selling on the internet are not enough quality. For example, I bought throusers for my son last summer. Unfortunitely, that product did not enjoy for me. They had written that 100% cotton. But that throusers had nyleon matelials and it is vey bad for kid’s skin. Because my son has allergy. Thus, I requested to return and online market’s owner did not allow. Then I have been saving that throusers. Finally, I decided that I do not buy something again from internet. I think that many people like me.
In conclusion, online market’s advantages and disadvantages are not suitable to compare. Because, everybody have different minds and people summarize another about it. In my opinion, online book just suitable for few kind’s products. Such as, delivery meal and tickets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72606050844 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7746550475 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6153846154 106.682146367 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.69230769231 20.7667163134 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101322137655 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274307780519 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345964644869 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633356370986 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126591863533 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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