Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In modern life, culture and art have been rapidly developing. But that situation is different in each country. Some people believe that government financing needs not to be used for assistant art and culture, other people think to support cultural activities probably be helpful for the human and the culture. Nonetheless, those topics must talk necessary.
If the government supports the department of the art and the culture, about that county would know easy who people of other countries and it is the best way to advertise that own country. Recently, people prefer to travel, and visitors are a huge chance. Such as, everybody had not known my country thirty years ago. But since many Mongolian guys participated in some competition, the world’s champion and Olympia, they could advertise the name of Mongolia. Absolutely, the Mongolian government helped finance and other important things.
In spite of, some country’s government does not still help and support art and culture. It is a very mistake issue. If a human of small countries advertises to use the internet in their countries, more people in the world would know their countries without the government’s supplies. Each country has a different especial culture. In my opinion, everybody should know about the culture of other countries.
Eventually, guys of modern became develop their country themselves power. Following this, population, city, and country have been improving. But if I was the mayor, I would make investment a lot for the department of art and culture. Obviously, my country’s government did many works for those departments. I think that it is not enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, i think, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31698113208 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95949636349 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0338943289 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1578947368 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338424516924 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915077034461 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12738828813 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221553194588 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121372743969 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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