The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The evolution of the society developing rapidly every day, follow that, social media has been stronger. When I was a kid, we did not have internet, we just used to connect which wrote the letters and talked telephone each other, and we were taking an information from tv and the newspapers. However, we can connect with our friends and family where stay other side of the world. It has not many years since humanity with social media. Nonetheless, people have been using for all things these platforms. Also, we have been using a seminar and an advertising more than tool of the communications.
Last year, all kind of schools and workers of office convertible in form which are online lessons and work at home because the pandemic involved the whole world. Thus, the lag in lesson did not grow up, students attending classes on time. Other hand, many kinds of businesses and services stopped in this time people who use possible the internet and social media are that teaching online lessons at home, it making benefit each other.
Even if social media has a lot of advantages, also it has many disadvantages. The number of cases that teenagers fall negative influence of social media are increasing in last few years. Because, they have not known any essence, they attract to bad things easily. Many children became victims cause these platforms. Also, not even children, and even adults got cheated, such as: online market. On the other hand, the cases that we visit our parents’ house are decreasing since we connected our relatives by online.
In my opinion, social media will more developing in the future. Therefore, we use it to our advantage and should use without persuaded to negative information. Obviously, everybody must to decide their conscious act how to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93046357616 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54326408077 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5495019358 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161753684585 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569901295514 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531744514263 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101523874846 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256181207526 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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