Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with teacher, can help them to do better at school. Others disagree.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition ?
Education is the most important thing which young people have to receive in order to have better future. Some parents think that, by enrolling their children to school, is not enough. Hence, parents also like their children to have extra hours of private lessons, it could be in some academies or they have private tutor to come to their house. But, private tuition could be a hassle to some people, therefore, it has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Most parents believe that private lesson can help their children to get better result on academics at school, meanwhile, others disapprove of this belief. Private lesson can be very beneficial to some students, because, it is very common for students to lose concentration at class, consequently, they might miss some explained materials. They could ask their private tutor about that material, not to mention, several hard questions too. Besides that, teachers tend to teach with theoretical steps, while, private institution can teach the same material with easier steps, resulting in, students can understand better.
Despite all the advantages stated previously, it also gain some disadvantages, such as, students would rely on private lesson instead of their school, or it will cost you a fortune. Enrolling children to private lesson, it means that, parents must afford more, where as, most of them are overpriced. For parents, who are struggling with financial matter, it would be a great loss to them.
Overall, prior having their children with after school classes, parents might already know about the advantages and disadvantages. It is their and their children’s option. However, private tuition are built to help voracious of students, who face huge struggle on school academics, because they aware that, not all students are adroit and have the same intellectual brain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29931972789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66901708162 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2118031365 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374687740985 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12823517651 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752386132684 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230857884198 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605179107073 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.